I live in a desert island property - Chapter 575

c-1 Final words

The main plot of “I Live on a Desert Island” has ended!

I finally breathed a sigh of relief. I feel that this ending is quite acceptable. Some readers may say, how can it be completed before the Eternal One is achieved?

I must explain here that Zhang Ming’s path is different from other people’s paths. His combat power is equivalent to that of the Immortal, while the combat power of the Space-Time Insect is stronger than that of the Eternal, so there is no need to follow other paths. The way of man.

Someone else asked, if you haven’t become the ultimate demon yet, how can you finish it?

As mentioned before, the time and space worm needs to find a new world to have the opportunity to become the ultimate demon.

If we were to write about a new world and a new map, it would obviously be stinky and long, and this bad money would really be inappropriate.

In addition, he also has an ultimate demon wife, so obviously there won’t be too many setbacks, so I think ending it here is a good choice.

Regarding this Demon God War, I actually cut out a lot of the plot. Originally, I planned to jump over the planetary fortress and fight the Demon God himself.

Let Miss Hui sacrifice herself again, [hoping] to achieve the ultimate goal and solve this disaster.

This way of writing, more than 50,000 to 60,000 words, should not be a problem.

But in the end I cut them off.

On the one hand, it is rather cliché.

On the other hand, if Miss Hui dies, it will stain the gourd, which is not good.

After all, Calabash is a gentle character that no ant can kill, so I chose the lighter ending.

All in all, a war was fought, but the planetary fortress did not fight the Demon God himself. Miss Hui did not sacrifice. [Hope] only completed some finishing work. There was no critical moment to turn the tide. All the participants in the war contributed.

It’s nice to be a little more relaxed, what do you think?

I won’t pursue a perfect ending. It’s definitely not worthy, but I think this ending is really satisfying.

Lao Zhang has a very happy life. His wife is virtuous, beautiful and considerate. He travels with his family and friends and has some small goals. The most important thing is that he not only has pure love, but also has a harem and is super sexually blessed (ah no, no). Open a harem, this is a single female protagonist)!

This is already the happiest state I can imagine!

You can give this ending a score.

1. Good (70-80 points)

2. Pass (60-70 points)

3. The dead eunuch is unfinished, Baga, you are dead! (Less than 60 points)

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Let’s talk about the performance of this book. The average subscription as of today is a little over 30,600. This is indeed the best performance I have ever achieved.

It seems to be higher than the previous books combined?

Among the previous books, the one with the best performance is “Deep Space: The Wandering Fleet”. The current average order is 9915, which is still 100 short of 10,000 orders!

Friends who are interested can take a look. As long as there are one hundred more readers, I will have two books with ten thousand subscriptions.

In addition, there are three masterpieces and three popular books.

It should be said that you can get rid of your Sudra identity and become a Vaishya QAQ!

But having said that, there was no anti-theft at that time, but now there is anti-theft, so it is normal for the data to increase.

Don’t be proud, keep up the good work.

As for the flaws of this book… well, there are many.

I am deeply aware of my shortcomings and am constantly learning. The first major flaw is that the protagonist returns to Earth too early.

I have been thinking, would the story be better if the protagonist solves everything and returns to Earth in the final ending?

The answer is obvious, it will be much better.

If you return to Earth too early, the main line of human civilization will have to be cut off.

Before the protagonist goes back, human civilization can be overthrown and restarted, billions of people can die, it can be tyrannical, a king can be in power, it can be dictatorship, it can be a pornographic revolution, in short, it can be written about anything!

But after the protagonist returns, it is obvious that this kind of thing cannot happen, and humans can only thrive.

Now that it is prospering, there is nothing to write about.

In addition, after returning, the two important supporting roles of Li Xianfeng and Wang Fumin have become less important.

After all, the protagonist is too strong.

What other roles can they have?

The lack of so much content is the reason why this book became “unsightly” in the later period, and it was also my biggest mistake.

The most important thing about writing a book is the sense of anticipation.

Expectations come from desires. When readers’ desires are satisfied, the book will naturally not look good.

But in the process of writing, unconsciously, I more or less became the protagonist.

Lao Zhang has been wandering, which is really a bit miserable.

As the author, the omnipotent ultimate devil, I subconsciously want him to go back as soon as possible.

So he returned to Earth prematurely.

I later realized the mistake, but there was nothing I could do to change it. Letting the protagonist go home too early is a major structural mistake.

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In addition, there are some major or minor mistakes, such as the Battle of the Ten Thousand Seas is poorly written, the combat is poorly written, map switching feels fragmented, etc.

I think these mistakes can be salvaged if they are refined and written more comfortably. They are considered minor mistakes.

This is a matter of state and writing power. It’s just that the pressure of serialization is too high, and some stories are indeed not well written. I apologize to everyone.

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Another major mistake is that the combat power level is not well designed.

Adding some cheats to attributes does have such flaws.

Once there are tens of thousands of attributes, there is no sense of gain for readers if they continue to add more attributes.

10 turns into 20, everyone is very happy, the benefits are huge, everyone is very happy!

But when 10,000 turns into 10,010, is there any sense of gain?

No.

Although the attributes were also increased by 10 points, I felt nothing at all, numb.

Unless the attributes are directly doubled, turning 10,000 into 20,000, then there will be some sense of gain.

But the exponential situation expanded, and the book soon collapsed. Soon it was one million or hundreds of millions.

Readers are actually not sensitive to big data. Is there any difference between one million and one hundred million? In fact, there is no.

Therefore, in the middle and later stages of this book, cheats that add attribute points do not appear very often, because they are not as exciting anymore.

This also led to the blurring of the power system in the later period, which can be regarded as a relatively serious mistake. It was not designed well from the beginning.

How to solve this problem?

It’s hard to say, it’s better than getting away from the ancestor, adding attribute points to the later stage, and it also collapsed.

It’s normal for a rusher like me to be unable to control myself.

If we have to solve it, one is to blur it, like the golden elixir and Yuanying in the system of cultivating immortals. There is no data system. After being blurred, readers can regain a sense of gain.

Another method is similar to DND, with attributes up to 30 points, and even gods only have 30 points. Every attribute is precious. This setting is actually quite interesting. I will study it further to see if I can learn from it.

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The above is some simple summary. I will not post a more detailed summary here.

Eternal Donkey is also a writer with a little bit of personal style. It is actually quite difficult for young authors to learn from it.

This book has no operation and is not ranked. If the above defects can be corrected and ranked, it may be able to reach a higher level. It is possible to subscribe for 40,000 or 50,000 yuan.

Of course, there are no ifs in the real world.

An average order of 30,000 yuan is already a satisfactory result for me. Sail against the current, and if you don’t advance, you will retreat. Maybe the next book won’t even make a cent, and it will become a big flop again?

Who knows, looking at it this way, I really can’t bear to end it.

But I decided to end it here and not continue to open the map. It would be a waste of money.

(It just so happens that bad money is really cool!)

After all, I really like the characters in this book, let them live a happy life, travel happily, and spend every day in the future, that’s it.

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The character design of this book may be the biggest improvement I have made in all these years of writing.

I believe there are still many characters that everyone likes in this book.

For example, the slut Shitou, the sentimental Xiao Bai, the mentally ill Lao Zhang, the old dog “Brother Hao”, and the Pelican Sister who finally appeared.

And then there is the heroine.

I’ve always been thinking, why do some people hate Miss Calabash?

There may be two reasons. The first is that the way she appears is a bit embarrassing. She was thrown over by [Long-cherished Wish], which is really embarrassing, and she was given some knives, so some readers don’t like this character.

The second is that some readers inherently don’t like books with female protagonists, or they only like human female protagonists, or she appears a little late.

But at least, I still like this heroine very much.

She is probably the girl I have written the best among all my books.

So much so that I had a preference for her, and finally let her accompany the protagonist as the “ultimate demon”.

If the heroine is not well written, the ending will be unacceptable.

Thinking about it on the other hand, if the soft rice ending can be accepted by the majority of readers, it means that the heroine is liked by most readers. Is this quite a success?

(Zhang Ming: I really didn’t get a fucking freebie! I didn’t make a single wish! I didn’t ask her to help me become the ultimate demon!)

(Eternal Donkey: I want to eat soft food, idiot.)

(Zhang Ming: So this is not a soft rice ending.)

(Eternal Donkey: Okay, this is not a soft ending, this is a perfect ending! Can I give the gourd to the readers?)

Ahem, it’s pretty good that a book can have several memorable characters.

After reading many books, I can’t remember anything except the main character!

In the next book, I will try to avoid some controversial areas and let the heroine appear earlier to avoid some embarrassing issues.

(I haven’t thought about what to write in my next book yet. I’ll think about it after the New Year.)

I also hope that the next book will do better.

But I don’t know if any readers will know me as an author by then. I hope you won’t delete it from your bookshelf after reading it. I’ll let you know here when I release a new book.

Next book, I will write a cool article that is as cool as possible for everyone.

Although this book conforms to the rhythm of the market, it is still not exciting enough and there are still some things that are not well written.

In the next book, I will try to be more relaxed and happy.

Relaxation is the trend of the times. Even I am gradually inclined to read relaxed stories, not to mention all the readers.

(Of course, a normal book contains laughter and tears. I still can’t write a pure novel.)

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Okay, the above is the final remarks.

After three thousand words, I won’t continue the nonsense literature.

There are some extra stories next.

The extras won’t be updated every day, they are just some light-hearted stories about laughing and joking while traveling.

Now that the main plot is finished, the subscription for the extra chapters will probably not be very good. It depends on everyone’s enthusiasm. If the subscriptions are good, I will write more. If the subscriptions are too low, I will write one or two extra chapters to fill in the gaps. OK.

If you have any extras you want to watch, please tell me.

Finally, thank you to the friends who have read this far, to Brother Shuhuang who has been correcting mistakes in the book review area, and to the operating officer.

Thanks everyone, see you in the next book.