In the universe online game, I can specify the drop - Chapter 862
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Ending ~~
The new author has finished writing a book!!
It has been more than a year since the first chapter of this book was uploaded on August 12, 2023. The author would like to thank the big brothers for their companionship over the past year, accompanying the author and Lu Kong through everything.
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As a new author, the author knows that there are still many shortcomings in his content.
For example, the upgrade was too slow in the early stage, with more than 100 chapters and only 10 levels advanced. I don’t know if this is the slowest online game article to upgrade (laugh.jpg).
For example, the rhythm in the later stage was too fast, mainly in the demon battlefield. The demons already knew the threat of Lu Kong, and they would definitely not be able to send heads slowly. They would definitely launch a thunder strike. In addition, there were so many demons in the demon battlefield, so upgrading was not a problem, so the author arranged for Lu Kong to upgrade quickly in this area.
Maybe there will be better arrangements for the plot later, but the author is still a rookie after all, and I can’t think of a better arrangement.
The other thing is the setting of the Demon Realm. The setting of the Demon Realm allows Lu Kong to not need to explore other areas or continue to brush dungeons. He only needs to enter the Demon Realm to kill demons and upgrade, which makes the content of the Central Continent very simple.
The route is very clear. As long as you enter the Demon Realm, you will have all the levels, equipment, etc.
It was okay the first one or two times, but it became boring the more times.
The plot is too monotonous. Except for Lu Kong brushing monsters to get drops, and then the various shocks of the system announcements, there is no interesting plot, let alone the emotional line. It’s a harem article, and those who understand it will understand it.
The character of the heroine doesn’t seem to be reflected.
I feel that the author needs to continue to strengthen himself in this regard and keep up the good work~~
Also, because Lu Kong’s strength increased too quickly, the main supporting characters in the front couldn’t keep up in the later period, and he didn’t create a more attractive character.
Actually, to be honest, it is still a problem of plot design. The author is too new in this aspect, woo woo woo~~
But anyway, as a new author and a new book, I am very satisfied that I can finish a book safely and steadily. I can write it like this. It exceeds my expectations~
As for some shortcomings, I will leave them for the author to slowly improve and correct later.
Here again, I would like to thank the big guys who have supported me till now!!
Then there is the new book.
The author tried to write a high-level urban martial arts novel in two books before (I have a daughter and need to earn milk powder money~Life is not easy), but I made a lot of mistakes. Readers gave a lot of opinions, and the author read them carefully. Some of them are indeed very reasonable.
After all, the author just started the book in a rush without thinking about anything. Facts have proved that it is indeed not possible~
In addition, the difficulty of opening two books is higher than the author imagined. The author’s brain can’t turn around, so he finally decided to cut off that book and stop opening two books. He will concentrate on finishing the online game book~
However, in his spare time when writing online games, the author sometimes thinks about new books.
The new book is probably a Cthulhu-style urban martial arts type. The author tried to write an opening, and I think it’s quite interesting. You can look forward to it.
Finally, after the online game is finished, the author will update some extra chapters from time to time. If you are interested, you can take a look at it~~
Finally, the author would like to thank all the big guys again. Thank you~~