My Wife is Tsunade Konoha - Chapter 218

c-1 Street Fighting Diary: Volume 2 Summary

This volume was originally not so long, but I forgot to divide it into volumes in the middle.

It can be counted as the sum of the contents of the second and third volumes originally envisioned.

Barely speaking, it achieved the goal I expected.

But there are more problems than volume one.

There are three main problems.

First, the rhythm issue.

Starting from Chapter 70, the rhythm deviates.

Too much daily, causing readers to drop a lot.

Later, the pace was accelerated, and the outing inspection approached the shelves, and another meaningless plot appeared.

It’s not meaningless, it’s just different from what I imagined.

Originally, I planned to write stories other than Konoha and bring some technical things to me.

But during that time, I wrote too fast, which led to flooding.

The war plot in the second half, I personally think it is still up to standard.

But there are too many fights and the rhythm is a bit too fast.

Second, the character problem.

Due to my own reasons, the supporting roles in the second volume are not outstanding.

Originally, I wanted to write about the progress of Tsunade, Minato, Obito, Kakashi and others.

But the expressiveness is not enough, and there are some tool people.

The biggest villain, Uchiha Madara, is also not well portrayed.

The third one is Invincible Text.

I found that I am not good at writing invincible text.

And because it is a fan, I dare not add too many original characters.

As a result, the protagonist is too invincible and loses the joy of growing up.

This can be regarded as a mistake in my setting before writing the article.

Because it is too invincible, the original biggest selling point of farming also disappeared in this volume.

In the next book, it should be no longer writing invincible articles.

In addition to these three, there are many small problems, so I won’t explain them one by one.

The third volume, and it should be the last volume.

Many readers can also see that my book is not long.

Unless it is to create a parallel world and switch to a comprehensive comic.

But this book does not have this setting, and the next book may be written.

I originally estimated that it was a million words, but now it seems that it may be shorter.

But I assure you it will work out.

Not a eunuch.

Finish the story.

The title of the third volume is Datong in the World.

main content:

The first one, about the construction of Thunder Country and Yunyin Village, will write some farming content.

The second one, the three holy places of psychic beasts, involves immortals and longevity, as well as some theatrical plots, the dragon veins of Loulan, the treasure chest of bliss in Caoyin Village, etc.

The third one is the development of the Akatsuki organization, Obito recruits members, and collects tail beasts to confuse Heijue. In the end, in the case of betrayal, Heijue was sealed to completely stop the Moon’s Eye plan.

The fourth is to conquer the land of land and the land of water and establish a unified country.

The fifth is the big roles of Shisui, Itachi, Naruto, Sasuke, Hinata, etc.

Sixth, the possible plot of the Otsutsuki clan.

Seventh, Haruki and Tsunade hold a make-up wedding, the finale.

The content of this volume is basically these seven contents.

Thank you readers for your rewards, recommendations, subscriptions and comments.

At present, the score of this book is about 1,000, which can be regarded as just getting started.

Anyway, thank you very much.

Finally, let’s talk about deleting comments. I usually delete comments that seriously affect the perception of readers who have not subscribed.

I am also a reader personally, and I know that seeing such comments greatly affects the reading experience.

Therefore it will be deleted.

Just leave if you don’t like it, there is no need to leave bad reviews.

Everyone works hard, so why make it difficult for the workers.

It’s really not easy to write a street novel while working.

Please forgive the author.

Now I am playing games, movies, TV, and going out to play, and the time for various entertainment has been reduced by more than half.

Old miserable.

Thanks again everyone.