The strongest self-disciplined captain of the Konoha Guards - Chapter 165

c-1 The final words

Originally, I finished writing the last chapter on the 30th, and then revised it on the 1st, and planned to finish it on the 2nd.

As a result, I was a little busy in the past few days, so I was delayed. Now I am adding this ending.

I apologize here.

Let’s talk about the whole book. Everything in this book is according to the outline, but the original plan is to write one million words. As a result, the first order was too low, less than 300, so I wanted to finish it quickly and cut a lot of plots.

The result is that it was finished with less than 500,000 words…

If I had known that the first order would be more than 200 and the subsequent average order would reach 500, I would have finished it seriously.

At least I should pursue a million words.

This is the first Naruto fanfiction written by the author. Although I have experience with a million words, the last book was finished a year ago. Now I am equivalent to a newcomer, so I didn’t handle this book well and it collapsed too quickly.

This book summarizes my experience, and I want to write the next one seriously.

It is still a Naruto fanfiction. I want to start with some unpopular characters or professions and write something new.

For example, let Yahiko be the protagonist, and let him change his fate and the fate of the Akatsuki organization.

Then let the red flag wipe the entire ninja world

It should be quite interesting.

The outline of the book with Yahiko as the protagonist has been prepared almost. The next step is to revise and improve it and write the beginning.

The next book should be online in early November.

The next time is the author’s self-summary. There is nothing else. If you don’t want to read it, you can skip it.

Insufficient points.

The first insufficiency is that the beginning is not well written. The first chapter has the golden finger, and the conflict between Uchiha and Konoha is also brought out, but the subsequent two chapters have too much content, which can easily cause readers’ disgust.

The second insufficiency is that many things from other worlds appear in the world of Naruto, which greatly affects the viewing experience, and the combat power is also easy to jump. Writing well is what an author should do, and not writing well is a poison point.

So summarize the good experience, reduce the content related to the end, and try to control it as much as possible.

The third shortcoming should be that Danzo was not dealt with quickly. I wanted to use it to force the third generation to abdicate, but it backfired and made readers think that it would not be written if it deviated from the original work.

I won’t do that in the next book. I will solve it directly.

If I could go back to the past now, I should kill Danzo directly and then summon the Uchiha to launch a coup.

The change of regime is very fast. Looking back at the history of the flower-growing family, it basically changed overnight.

In this book, I also let the protagonist give the other party three days to prepare, and he also needs to be publicly executed. Now think about it…

The fourth shortcoming is related to the third one, that is, the character of the protagonist is not set well. Influenced by the protagonist of the original god fan fiction in the previous book who is a fun person, this book accidentally approaches to a fun person.

Although it was corrected later, the protagonist killed everyone who should be killed, but it was difficult to change in the beginning, so it still had an impact.

So in the next book, the protagonist should be set to be more decisive.

The fifth early content was not well laid out. Not only did the strength increase too quickly, but the killing of the third generation and his gang was too fast.

I wanted to write an invincible article, but I failed to write a truly invincible article.

I should have laid the groundwork for the life of the Konoha Guard first, and then used the identity of the Guard Captain to bring out the conflict between Uchiha and Konoha, and then the following plot would be much easier to write, and the killing of the Third Generation group could be put on the shelves, so that readers would not lose a large number of readers after killing the Third Generation.

I will write it here first, and I will find the shortcomings one by one when I reread this book later.

As for other character settings, plot control, and writing style, there are still many problems that need to be solved step by step.

That’s it.

Finally, I would like to thank all the readers for their support. Your support is my biggest motivation for writing.

Bow.